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     A breath in new fallen snow burnt holes of torture into her chest, for the feeling was so piercing, so very iced. It was a day like this when, he'd disappeared, when he'd been taken from her, when the wall, fell. Even though feelings of nostalgia and regret were swarming around her now, nipping at her, even more painful than the deep breaths she was inhaling, she kept her forest eyes to the smeared gray sky. Suddenly... without warning..

"Hungary?"

She turns, there he is, but how?
He'd.. he'd fallen.. how...

Was it.. a miracle come to awaken her soul, come to warm her in such, bitter cold?

Yes.
Yes he was.
A Miracle.
ITS SHORT!!

:iconyayromanoplz:

I wanted to test out my writing skills since, I've been drawing more than writing recently..

So I scritched out this little blurb from the unconsciousness of my.. mind...

Its about the years after Prussia had disappeared.. how Hungary had spent the winters without someone to warm her... she would ask Austria, but, he.. he is so proper and respectable and she doesn't want to burden him with her heart, she doesn't want to make him think he's her 'second choice' or 'pitty giver'

I do like PruHun... but like I ALWAYS say its a battle for my heart and mind... AusHun is my preffered but the love that could be between Prussia and Hungary is so gracefully beautiful you know? BOTH PAIRINGS ARE!

Its so hard sometimes OTL

Well that's all~
I know its random, and short, sorry?
Pffft
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:iconjj-jam:
JJ-Jam Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I love it. PruHun FTW. 
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MrsTomlinson214 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Student Writer
This is awesome! But PuHun FTW, dude. XD
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TrepidationChance Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Not random.
Very short.
WANT MORE!!!!!!!!!
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PokeFox Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
There might be more.... maybe xD
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TrepidationChance Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Please????????
I'm shocked with how good it was.
More is a must!!!!!
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PokeFox Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Well this was meant to be just a short, a test of my limits if you will... so I can't guarantee that there would be any more added onto this...
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TrepidationChance Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
is that so........
well, if you do write more, PLEASE TELL ME!!!!!
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ItsThatOneChick Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Ohmygod
:iconotlplz:

THAT WAS SO BEAUTIFUL FOR BEING SO SHORT. I love that couple... PLEASE CONTINUE~

:iconprettyplzplz:
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PokeFox Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I've written stories on them xD

Or.. A story?

Its in my fanfiction Folder in my Gallery ~

I will be writing more on them though, I can assure you that

*bows*
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ItsThatOneChick Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh thank god, I'm gonna go read them all now. :iconfuckyeahamericaplz:
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PokeFox Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
O.o...

Read Austria's Diary too~

It may give a different perspective xDD
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ItsThatOneChick Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I just love these couples so much...

:iconobsessedplz:
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staplesponge Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2011
Nice story, but I am the kind of person who loves the cold. That is one of the things I love about Colorado; they say the closest thing to heaven is a snowy (Christmas) day in Colorado.
Still, it does portray the intended theme well enough and I understood it. Very pretty :)
...why is this featured in a yaoi group?
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nekobaka99 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2011  Student General Artist
I love the cold too ^^ It's better than sweating n the heat. I hate sweating ._.
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PokeFox Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
OHCRAP...

I just realized xDD

I usually write some Spamano fanfics so I put it in there OTL

I'll have to take it out of those.. gosh I swear sometimes I space out T--T

I adore the cold as well..
More than heat that's for sure...

but for this story, it had to be portrayed as a lonely feeling... which is what I do feel at times, when the sky is gray and the ground is white... heh...
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RandomNess14 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I liked it. Simple yet nice with just the right amount of hidden emotion you know is there. ^^
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PokeFox Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you~~ <3

I was hoping that's how it'd go across ^^

So I did my job!!
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ZeldaKinz Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2011  Student Artisan Crafter
Good job :D
short but I enjoyed it :)
You should continue it ^0^
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PokeFox Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I just might xDD

But I am not too sure where it'd go...

Either way, I will be writing some MORE stuff about PrussiaxHungaryxAustria issues in the future xDD
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ZeldaKinz Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2011  Student Artisan Crafter
okay yay~ :D
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PokeFox Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
~ <3
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GermanKitties Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
PRUCAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XV
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PokeFox Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Was that.. completely necessary?

....
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GermanKitties Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Idk
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PokeFox Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Not to be rude or anything... but please don't do it again, this story is PruHun and if you don't like it, then, don't bring your ideals into here....


Thanks ^^

And I hope you have fun with your own pairings~ <3
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GermanKitties Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I will!!! I'm sorry I have spaz moments sometimes
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